Talk:Hidashi/@comment-2601:804:C201:3500:18ED:F78:179B:CE1E-20170913144956

Attention all Hidashi shippers! This is the summary for my very first Hidashi fanfic! Please note that in this fanfic, Hiro and Tadashi are NOT related AT ALL! And now, back to the summary.

Summary:Hiro Hamada was just an average 15 year old, going to school, hanging out with friends, and participating in bot fights on the streets of San Fransokyo. Until one day he got a strange note in the mail. What did the note contain? It contained a diagram of Hiro's entire family tree, and a letter declaring him to be the next rightful King of England. At first, Hiro was completely ecstatic. But, with the growing knowledge that if he decides to take up the mantle as King, that it would mean having to leave his friends and Aunt Cass behind, he at first refuses. But eventually, with a little encouragement and (in GoGo's case) pushing from his friends and Aunt, he agrees to go. When he finally arrives at his new home of Buckingham Palace,  he is at once beset by tons of servants, other young and older nobles of the land, and the Knights of the Round Table, his own sort of British Secret Service. Anyway, one night at a fancy-as-hell Masquerade Ball, it is announced that the King must choose a spouse  (be it man or woman) by the end of next winter,  as to preserve the Royal bloodline. It is also revealed that the King has the right to choose any one person from either the Knights of the Round Table,  or from the obsolete but still in order Royal Guard, to serve as his personal Royal Bodyguard. And at the Ball that night, there is one person who catches Hiro's eye:a young, handsome senior Royal Guard officer by the name of Tadashi Haruki. Without a second thought, Hiro announces him as his Bodyguard. Days, weeks, and months pass. Hiro doesn't go anywhere without his loyal Bodyguard Tadashi by his side. Eventually,  they become friends,  and even that eventually blossoms into something more. But, can they keep their love a secret forever?

So, what do you guys think? I could use some help with characterisation. You see, I do want this story to be a Hidashi love story, but I want the story's plot to mainly focus on Hiro's progression and learning time as King, with the love story on the side, you know what I mean? So, would anyone be willing to give me some advice on how to write this story?