Talk:Modern AU/@comment-107.178.47.233-20160820234213

My rotbtd fanfiction Okay yeah Rapunzal is a stupid girl who is being abused by her mother and for the sake of the story her mother let's her go to High School because that's like the best setting ever. Immediately all the boys fall for her because she's beautiful and perfect in every way and popular and she's got this stunning olden hair and green eyes. Wait she's too much of a Mary Sue let's make her um clumsy. Whoops she drops books everywhere

Meet Eugene this horrible douchbag who bullies kids and hits on Rapunzal but she doesn't like him.

Meet Jack this horrible-douchbag, who picks and bullies kids because he has some tragic past. So yeah he's hot and we feel sorry for him because of that. He is always kissing every girl that walks by him and Rapunzal falls for him because he's hot and has had a tragic past.. Again he's had a tragic past so we feel sorry for him so it doesn't matter if he shoved kids into lockers and throws paint everywhere. He's the guardian of fun so he'll do drugs and he'll sleep with girls and leave them

. Meet Hiccup, easily the best character out of all of them who is forced to do jacks manual labour for him and is the nerdy ugly kid with glasses nobody likes and he blushes whenever Astrid is around and trips over his feet his worthless really even though his smart and he's just there but whatever this stories about Jack and Rapunzal so screw Hiccup.

Astrid is a bitch who bitches about everything and insults Hiccup even though technically she really has no reason to in this universe but whatever we need to squeeze merricup in here.

enter Merida who's almost as bad as Astrid but nicer I guess and she and hiccup start dating but that's all glossed over because of Rapunzal and Jack.

Kristoff is just there for the sake of being with Anna who's also there because Elsa is and is just a mini version of Rapunzal Eugene moves to the other end of the world Enter Hans who beats up all the guys because he feels like it and then runs away with his tail between his legs. Enter Elsa this sexy ice-cold bitch (pun-intended) who likes Jack now because he's like totally changed into this really sweet guy for a girl.. Watch how Elsa humiliates Rapunzal and things get nasty. What do you think? am I a great writer or what?